You know, my character made the same mistake as well, only he fell out of the sky and turned himself into Brightwing to avoid getting flattened.
BOOYA! NOW THIS GUY CAN CHASE DOWN MY OC FOR A REASON I DON'T KNOW!
LOL:Who Hit ME?!! Cool!
I like the style this is in! the others say this is your entire audition? it's not your entire audition, right? there's at least one more page right?
IDK, maybe I could add Angel's explanations of the tourney.
you should and maybe give an idea of what Damien's like you know, make the readers interested in the guy
ok, also, just as a heads up, I might make it that Damien doesn't have dreameater anymore, he's already pretty powerfull.
I see! I'm curious to see why he no longer has it (since he still had it when he was transported to the tournament grounds)! maybe somebody stole it or maybe he was like: fuck dis shit tournament I'm outta here :0 ur maybe somebody ate it
too many things have happened in one page! my mind is about to explode!!!! aahahahahaaaaaaaaaah
This is really good, but to me it feels kinda short
Dang! An entire entry in one page? That's talent!!